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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Olivia

    Ahh, this is so good. name's Olivia. Haha, fo' real. And I have tried drugs, but never 'E'. Ew. x: But I actually really liked this. It was almost like ...

    Apr 2, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Madness of Love

    Well, I didn't see too many mistakes!(: Haha, that's always a good thing. For a first post story, this was really good. Impressive!(: I'd love to read more, so don't ...

    Mar 29, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Without Him

    I really liked the lyrics of this song because I can relate to them. It was enjoyable to read this, I enjoyed it.(:

    Mar 29, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Perfect Mistake

    This is very intriguing and I liked it a lot. I'm kind of tired because I've been babysitting for the past 8 hours but, if I was more awake I ...

    Mar 29, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Complicated Love

    I enjoyed this. It wasn't the best, but it was pretty damn good!(:

    Mar 29, 2008
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Mask

    Ahh, this is a very creative piece.(: Pretty much, everyone already pointed out what I saw. So I have nothing to really put down here. I really liked it. You ...

    Mar 29, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Welcome to Miami: Chapter 1. [Edited and Rewritten]

    Haha well, see I've based this off my friends. And like I said before, Carly - Christina Brad - Brandon Evie - Me Arron - Evan. Those are my friends ...

    Mar 28, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Welcome to Miami: Chapter 1. [Edited and Rewritten]

    To my last review, thanks. Here's to answer your question: My name is Olivia and my nickname is Lu. This story is based off my friends: Carly - Christina Brad ...

    Mar 28, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: All part of the camouflage

    Ahh,I really really liked this! The characters are so, so REAL. aha Great job, really(:

    Mar 28, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: She's So Perfect

    Eh, it was sketchy. But I liked it. (: I am not feeling it yet though, maybe a few more details here and there, know what I mean?

    Mar 28, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: All in the Families

    Aight!(: If you'd rather email me, my email is all my other info is on my profile.

    Mar 25, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Modern Penelope of Odysseus part 1

    ODYSSEUSS?! DUDE WE JUST GOT DONE THIS BOOK IN ENGLISH! ha now I have to do a brochure on one of the placed odysseus visited on his journey back to ...

    Mar 25, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: All in the Families

    Holaa chickaa. Got yer message and I'm here to help again. I'm not a critisizing Nazi, but I did noticed like a lot of grammer and sentence usage mistakes in ...

    Mar 25, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: All in the Families

    I'M BACK. dundundun(: Nah, don't be worried, I'm not some hardcore um.. female dog.. that critisizes EVERYTHING. I'm just here to help!(: Aight aight, yo, here: The first: " Pulling ...

    Mar 25, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: "My Book" (Chapter 1)

    Ahh so yes, I'm reading it(: And I LIKE ITTTT! :D

    Mar 9, 2008


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